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I was just peeking in,
i saw your nervous grin

i knew it was from your heart
altho on and off it did dart

i know the warmth and fire
your poem did inspire

i often write critique
in a poem unique

you have passed my test
you are1 of the best

now off the record, i wish you love
i know thats what you were thinking of

very well written
i felt smitten